11-11-2004, 06:18 AM

I'm makin this little comic about this vampire who moved into this house next to a girl. The girl hears strange noises nextdoor all the time. So she uses binoculars to see what's always going on.. Sooner or later, she finds out he's a vampire. After he knocks on her door for the first time, he stalks her. Heh. Just thought I'd describe what this cover is all about.. I wanted it to look like some old cheesey 80's horror movie cover.

11-11-2004, 08:16 PM
The linework is good, though the background is a little rough. What did you use to color? It looks like crayon =\

Huntress Krystle
11-12-2004, 12:38 AM
well done :) love the vampire!

11-12-2004, 12:44 AM
Looks good! It does really capture that 80's look! Well done!

11-12-2004, 11:54 PM
Wow good job!

grn apple tree
11-13-2004, 12:25 AM

11-14-2004, 10:59 AM
Thanks for the comments, guys :). Here's another pic I drew and colored on adobe: http://tinypic.com/llfts It's a drawing of my friend. He's been telling me to draw oen of him since two weeks ago.. so I finally drew 'im.

11-29-2004, 03:28 AM
http://tinypic.com/p20ra the bike is s'posed to be invisible like that. I wish it wasn't so big.. cause it looks more scribbly that way.

grn apple tree
11-30-2004, 02:48 AM
i like the bike pic out of the two new ones

11-30-2004, 09:18 PM

Good pictures though :)

The only thing that I've noticed is that in the picture of your friend, his left leg looks detached from the rest of his body. But other than that, very good job.

11-30-2004, 09:56 PM
Yeah. The thigh would be much bigger... right now it looks like he doesn't have one.

And don't go overboard on wrinkles and such, Keep them focused on the bendy parts of clothing, like the elbows, knees, etc, and the places where they bunch up, so there'd be folds or wrinkles at the very bottom of the pants if they were oversized, but not necessarily around the shin area.