01-01-2005, 03:43 AM
I made this last night..any comments or suggestions, good and bad are appreciated. I made this one pretty fast, and it shows, lol.

01-01-2005, 10:26 PM

01-01-2005, 10:27 PM

Aerith Gainsborough
01-03-2005, 09:38 PM
Not bad.... :)

Darth Pepper
01-03-2005, 10:18 PM
Your comments are as pointless, as an asshole here.=>
(<3 Kill Bill)

The artistic section here has gone down the shitters; most the people who post in the artistic section are retarded. I haven't seen one decent critique; instead all you people can do is spam up the place with: "Good", or "Nice". How about some critique? Or a thoughtful comment appreciating ones work. A complete sentence maybe? Is it that hard? Also "Good� or "Nice" is the only thing you people seem to be able to say about someone�s work. The person isn't going to get anything out of the post if you're just going to blindly praise the work. It's called constructive criticism, and it will help the person. Blindly blurting "Oh, that's cool" isn't going to provide any benefit for the artist, where on the other hand C.C will, and it will also help improve his/her artistic abilities.

Now getting back on subject.

Fullmetalyuffie, it's not bad, but many changes could be made. First off, I presume this is a wallpaper, and for a wallpaper it has way too much text in my opinion. Usually just a theme would do, but don't get me wrong It's very fitting for the situation, and all, but it takes away from the image. Sticking to one scheme I think would bring the whole thing together, because they are just images slapped all around, and I get a confused view of the wallpaper. If you stuck to one color scheme, it would be easier to see as a whole. One last thing, I think the text would look much better when capitalized, and added a period to at the end.

Overall I would give the wallpaper a C+.

01-03-2005, 11:09 PM
Nice blending, needs different text (preferably smaller and less), and a colour scheme and/or theme :B

But aside from that it's got good blending,

grn apple tree
01-22-2005, 06:19 AM
It's pretty good. I like the overlaying.