05-25-2007, 08:55 PM
In My Heaven

When the worlds blend
When all the sorrows end
When the sun turns into dust
When we tread through mud

When the birds start to fly
And the clouds blaze the sky
When I can stop thinking
When I can start breathing

Then I know I�ll be

In my heaven
Where no one can reach me
In my heaven
Where I find I am the one and only
In my heaven
Free to do whatever I please
In my heaven
Where I don�t have to cry down on my knees
In my heaven
This is where I�ll be

Bend to My Will

Feeling the hate rushin thru my veins
Burning, my heart torn up into flames
Overheating I can�t fight this feeling
Can�t stop till I see you bleeding

Anger consumes my light
The abyss of darkness you can�t fight
I laugh as I see you there
Stripped of your pride, I leave you bare

Defeat rings in your ear
Every time my face is there, you shall fear
Don�t defy me I will make you succumb
Don�t feel or think, you are numb

Garden of Roses

Freedom within a sanctuary bound
Lost within a figment of hope
Imagination resolving my nightmares
Dissolved into a mystical world

Where dreams come alive
And fantasies are reborn
Equivalent to the sound of a waterfall

Whispering into my ear
Crossing a boundary of illusion
Sensations filled upon desire to create

Watch the snow queen vanish into a blanket of white
Left upon a vulnerable heart
Questioning reasons of righteousness

A heart melting on an open windowsill
Defrosting the cold terrors released in my skin
Unearthing life, breathing deeply

Incantations upon a cycle of storms
Soothed within the caressing of lightning
Reaching the plains of my mind

Sky lit stars far beyond our destiny
Forgiven, forgotten of sin and wrongdoings
Secrets written on the stone flowers

Washing away the patterns of unholiness
Wrapped in the arms of light
Angel of blissfulness surrounded by joy

Come to me swiftly in this garden of roses


Betrayal in your eyes
Love in my soul
Never let me relive lies
That have torn me bone from bone

Entranced by your arms
That held me safe and tight
Keep them around me to make me warm
Hold me through the night

Draw me closer to your heart
So I can hear the beats
The rhythm pulsating in your veins
Listening to it speak

Angel, My Angel

Lay down the hand of impurity
Passing signs I never paid attention to
Following the angel's footsteps
I hear a whisper

Angel come to me, beckon my soul
Safe and warm in your presence
Light my soul on fire
Beginning to unravel the dreams of my heart

A thread bares thoughts of immortality
Where angels fly and demons die
Forgetting dreams of reality
Being here with my angel tonight

Judging my soul, you whisper sweetly
Saying words of innocence
Giggling and laughing along the way
Singing your song of purity

Lifted on clouds of forever
Soaring to places above
Dreaming of existence in heaven
Believing in love

Angel of music, angel of passion
Lift me high on your wings
Angel of sincerity, purity, holiness
Come to me with your swift whiteness

Carry me on blankets of love
Spread throughout the sky
Keeping me in a sense of dreaming
Blinded by the heart beating brilliantly

Angel of my soul, angel of beauty
Angel of everything true
Angel guide me to the kingdom
Hearing my sweet words for you

A Love so Sweet

Graceful, the hand that touches me
Beyond my wildest dreams I can reach
Beyond the stars, in heaven above
Guiding me there on silver wings is your love

Where dreams begin and sorrows end
That's where you will find me
I'm there for all eternity
Wrapped up in a blanket of comfort

Protect me with your star-lit eyes
Trusting you'll never let me fall
Believing you're my one and only
I take your hand and start anew

Restless heart has now been opened
With the longing to be set free
You came and broke through the cage
Made my dreams come alive

You wiped away the tears of pain
Took me to a palace of love
Holding you close, whispering
The sweetest words anyone will hear

Beyond my dying day
Beyond the reach of doubt
How ever far apart
I will love you

Caressed by the beauty within
This feeling that I've never felt before
You are the air I breathe
Oxygen filling my lungs, I can feel you

I never believed in destiny
Until I saw you
You made me believe there was truth
That the world was somehow different

Thank you for this opportunity
To share with you my secrets
Here and now we share our world
Only with a love so sweet

Another Untitled

And now, there's only

Restless nights, bloodshot eyes
Without you
Idiotic fights, twisted lies
Missing you, yearning for your love

Driven to the edge of insanity
Where the hell are you when I need you
Crossed between the lies
Broken promises, deceit

Beginning a life without you
It's like I have to start over and be reborn
Hear me, when I cry out for you
Believe me, I've never had love before you

Killing all my sins
Losing everything
Can't find the path that I went astray from
Turning from love to loneliness

But through it all
I'm glad I had a chance with you
If I could choose again
I would do the same thing

Cause it is better to have loved and lost
Then to have never at all

Realm of Angels

Angel of dreams
Sing to me softly
Call upon times of forgetfulness
Where sorrows end
Love reconstructs
Building an eternity of grace
Lasting a lifetime
Souls intertwined
Magically inclined to bliss
Escaping the realms of yesterday

**Okay well that's it. Hope you like em!

05-25-2007, 09:01 PM
Even though it is garbage, you may take some measure of solace in the fact that it is better than 99% of the other crap that gets posted here. That is, of course, not saying much, but I'm sure you'll take what you can get.

05-25-2007, 09:05 PM
I'll take it. haha. Thanks <3

05-25-2007, 09:16 PM
They sound more like songs to me. Some of them were OK, but some of them were... not good. I guess I was busy BREATHING. You have to work on your grammar, baby. :(

05-25-2007, 09:26 PM
Grammar, like how?

Oh wait... Do you mean at the end of my poems?

Some of them aren't supposed to be sentences or pauses, they're just thoughts.

05-25-2007, 09:41 PM
I only read two of those, and I have to say I really like the "Bend to My Will" one. I started reading the third, but I didn't think it was too good and stopped. xD

05-25-2007, 09:44 PM
It's good. Thanks for reading <3

05-25-2007, 09:55 PM
Oh, so they're only thoughts? To be honest, I actually did like quite a lot of them, but I guess I'm used to be such freak about correct grammar use in poems.

One recurring issue in your poems is that they become a little too saccharine at times, so just be careful not to make them too "Mary Poppins".

05-25-2007, 09:58 PM
Awww.... thanks. <3 You guys are nice.

05-25-2007, 10:06 PM
And you're pretty good.

You're a girl, right? For some reason when I picture you, I see a maiden from Medieval times. It's crazy, I know. xD

05-25-2007, 10:07 PM
haha Yeah I'm a girl. Hm Medieval times huh? Nice. If you want to know what I look like, you can click here:


It's the only website I have right now that has my pic :)

05-25-2007, 10:10 PM
Wow, you're pretty foxy. *Dies*

05-25-2007, 10:12 PM
hahah ty ;)

jewess crabcake
05-25-2007, 10:24 PM
18 bull.

05-25-2007, 10:44 PM
I am 18. April 17, 1989 Just graduated I swear!