Palawelis
03-31-2008, 01:18 AM
Happened when i had a long discussing with my parents at the kitchen. I was mad and shit but now it went well :)

Life all alone
(Verse 1)
The Planet of Earth is beyond me
What a pure Birth nobody understands me
Family supposed to support each other
I have my word but nobody seems to bother
I am getting mad at my mama
She will always bring out the drama
Daddy sits quiet and stays cool
I spit out my shit now I am a fool
Life is not easy I have my reason
I hear myself breathing and freezing
I sit here alone reminisce to myself
Till I understand myself and respect myself
I get my inspiration from my Good and Hard times
In my room using my mind and writing some rhymes
Life all alone

(Verse 2)
Still not graduated from High school
Hang out with my homie I was a fool
At the elementary breaking all the rules
Grown up as the troublesome adolescent
Hard time I had, what a true convalescent
Always pressure and discussion at home
Everything collapsed as the destruction of Rome
Life is hard to understand and to express
But I have to press on, stand up and progress
I have a goal; out from hole I’ll discover my true location
Basement fills with paperwork ready to unveil my destination
Life all alone

(Verse 3)
As soon as I’m done with my songs
Then I’ll move along work on another song
I’ll use my mind and my time for my new rhyme
These are mine and my pride, nobody steals my ride
As soon I release my song I’ll see some changes
I’ll wander around the street no more distant-strangers
I’ll make my Mama and Daddy proud
No more drama they’ll be happy all around
All that spit and slanging are my vision
I’ll sing and rapping for my reason
I’ll keep on going till I stop breathing
Life will change, every pain will be gone
And when the pain is gone, it stops to rain
And when the rain stops, we see the sun
And I’ll kicking my rhyme and have some fun
Life all alone

execrable gumwrapper
03-31-2008, 03:57 AM
Emo rap?

J. Peterman
03-31-2008, 04:11 AM
can you do some turtle rap?

Locke_FF36
03-31-2008, 04:15 AM
hahaha, rap is such a joke.

seriously though, get over it emo

Palawelis
03-31-2008, 02:46 PM
Hehe awesome feedbacks, i wasn't really expecting that..<.<

Nah, i am not emo in real life but i don't rap about bling bling and honeys ;)

Palawelis
03-31-2008, 02:48 PM
can you do some turtle rap?

Turtle rap??? Sure!!! I'll add Koopa and Ninja turtle, damn that would be a great mix!!!

Sobye
03-31-2008, 05:56 PM
This is shameful.

Palawelis
03-31-2008, 06:56 PM
Please tell me what is ''shameful'' except for the emoness. :):P

Locke_FF36
04-01-2008, 04:25 AM
Please tell me what is ''shameful'' except for the emoness. :):P

The Demise of Humanity.

Rap/Hip Hop has a lot to do with the intelligent part of it.

TM
04-01-2008, 04:55 AM
Come on, Jerichooo
You know I got ya, yeah

One, Break the wall down
(Break down the walls)

For those about to rock and what ya want
Baby you know you're Judas and I'm your priest
Baby what I got is not from the least
Bring it through the stage in the rage of a beast

Step in the arena and break the wall down
Step in the arena and break the wall down

So good (You know I got ya), Soooooo right
Yeahhh, Yeah

I wake up from a deep sleep
You're all weak
You're living in the agony of defeat
I am the master of your whole heap
I am the pack that flock ya like sheep

Step into the town and break the wall down
Your heart beat is the only sound
Step into the light and then you'll know
You were stopped and dropped by the Walls of Jericho

Whatcha ya gonna do?
Jericho
You're coming down
Feel me now, Jericho
Can't stop, uh, (Feel me now)
Break the walls down, Can't stop, Jericho

For those about to rock, set the clock
For those about to jump, I'm all pumped
For those about to go, watch me flow
Break down the Walls of Jericho

Watch you want?
I'll break you down
What ya got?

Jericho all around

Complimentary “Break Down The Walls” Ringtone

Related for Movie


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Soundtrack CD
Movie DVD
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Chris Jericho lyrics
Break Down The Walls lyrics
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J. Peterman
04-01-2008, 05:44 AM
ignore him he is only like 14

execrable gumwrapper
04-01-2008, 06:24 AM
hahaha, rap is such a joke.

seriously though, get over it emo


The Demise of Humanity.

Rap/Hip Hop has a lot to do with the intelligent part of it.

Locke, you're a fucking idiot, JFTR.

Locke_FF36
05-11-2008, 04:15 PM
Locke, you're a fucking genius, JFTR.

Thanks dude.

virtualchan
05-12-2008, 01:36 AM
^I expect to hear that at the next nobel prize acceptance speech^

Ngrplz
05-16-2008, 02:03 AM
I can't stand cRAP but I don't mind some hip hop. Still I know your poem had a lot of blood sweat and tears put into it, but I just can't help but think "Oh no not another emo."

I'm no expert, but maybe if you change your subject matter, you may be onto a winner :)

execrable gumwrapper
05-16-2008, 03:31 AM
Thanks dude.

NP homes

RikkuYunaRinoa
05-16-2008, 08:38 PM
There once was a man named paul
He worked really hard, but often dropped the ball
His boss was upset, but he let it go
Until one day, paul stepped in snow
the snow was cold
however the cunt lost his job coz the company was sold


That took me my entire life to write. Be nice with your feedback please.

Palawelis
05-16-2008, 08:45 PM
This song is old screw it, and pretty nice one Cookie. :o!

TM
05-17-2008, 09:09 PM
For those about to rock, set the clock
For those about to jump, I'm all pumped
For those about to go, watch me flow
Break down the Walls of Jericho

RikkuYunaRinoa
05-17-2008, 09:22 PM
..

execrable gumwrapper
05-17-2008, 09:28 PM
There once was a man named paul
He worked really hard, but often dropped the ball
His boss was upset, but he let it go
Until one day, paul stepped in snow
the snow was cold
however the cunt lost his job coz the company was sold


That took me my entire life to write. Be nice with your feedback please.

PAUL SOUNDS LIKE A FUCKWIT

RikkuYunaRinoa
05-17-2008, 09:30 PM
Yeah he is. But that's why his boss felt sorry for him and let the stuff he did slide. It got alot of meaning hidden in those six lines.

execrable gumwrapper
05-17-2008, 09:34 PM
Cookie, you've changed my life.

TeknoBlade
05-23-2008, 10:27 PM
Okay Palawelis, RAP = SHIT.

This is what I see:

cliche cliche prepositional phrase contraction rhyme
verbum dicendi colloquialism conjunction improper syntax rhyme

Your "raps" are verbose; you use too many superfluous words.

PS: DO POETRY LIKE A MAN, WHERE THE WORDS COUNT

virtualchan
05-24-2008, 08:05 AM
[QUOTE=TeknoBlade;1076367]Okay Palawelis, RAP = SHIT.

Not everyone listens to rap for the lyrics (poetry? ok whoever calls it that is an idiot), for some its about the beat and the flow. And what musical tracks don't use superfluous words?? What the hell kind of princeton jam bands do you listen to...

If I wanted to listen to proper syntax I'd go to....uhhh....yea thats rite

Locke_FF36
05-24-2008, 06:03 PM
Okay Palawelis, RAP = SHIT.

This is what I see:

cliche cliche prepositional phrase contraction rhyme
verbum dicendi colloquialism conjunction improper syntax rhyme

Your "raps" are verbose; you use too many superfluous words.

PS: DO POETRY LIKE A MAN, WHERE THE WORDS COUNT

Right on Bro

J. Peterman
05-29-2008, 02:54 AM
Locke FF36 never have I seen a better poster!

Locke_FF36
05-29-2008, 04:56 PM
Locke FF36 never have I seen a better poster!

Thanks Garamond, your not to bad yourself.

J. Peterman
05-29-2008, 06:27 PM
But you are TOO good!

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