02-08-2009, 05:47 AM
When I wanted to cry, you were there for me
I just gotta say thank you...You are my best friend
I only have 6 minutes to write this poem, I wish I had more time
But I have to say goodbye to you now...

02-12-2009, 04:33 PM
Impromptu poems are good... I like... gj ^ ^

Blue Ray
04-20-2009, 05:14 AM
aww so cute

04-20-2009, 08:43 AM
No offense, but learn Iambic pentameter.

04-20-2009, 08:37 PM
Quite sweet, but not worth reading as a spectator.

"You Envied the Stars Their Height
Amy Blakemore

The day folded;
Like a Cabbage White closing its wings
On a windowsill.

With the old, worn-out risk,
the unexplainable, skewed
of drunkenness

you climbed the fire escape.

Got on the roof.
But once you were there, you
envied the stars

their height

and could not get back down."

It reminded me of this, for some reason.

Keep writing, I say!