04-12-2011, 02:59 AM
YouTube - Suite of Music (

Here's a suite of material that I've written over the past few months.

Selections include:
The Big Race
Going Into Battle
Piano Ideas

Please comment, I would be interested to know what you think overall.

Chocolate Misu
04-12-2011, 03:16 AM
^ You may want to fix your link there :p

Let's see *takes a listen*

:00 - 2:00 - I like the foreground tune but the background tune started to irk me a bit being so quickly repetitive. It kinda sounded a bit like a siren to me :(

2:00 - 3:00 - Nice and pretty :)

3:00 - 3:45 - Pretty good.

3:45 - 5:25 - I kinda like this one.

5:25 - 6:15 - Sounds ok.

6:15 - 6:50 - Hey I liked that keep going :)

6:50 - 7:05 - That............. sounds really familiar...........

7:05 - 7:35 - WOAH! I seriously like this bit. With the white noise sound that you picked up while recording it seems to feel like it has a distance to it. I love that!

7:35 - 8:07 - Bass note sounds too over bearing to me :( I would have liked to hear the other part be a little louder.

8:07 - 8:33 - I like this too...... but somehow it sounds familiar...

8:33 - end - sounds ok to me :)

I think with the most part in your midi sounding tracks, you should figure out something to do with those bass lines. It seems droning to me. I don't know how to make musics so I don't know how to suggest to fix it :p All in all it sounds like you've got a good start :)