03-29-2003, 05:46 AM
I'm still not at the point where I'm even halfway decent at drawing but this is a step up I think. Please criticize.

03-29-2003, 02:12 PM
I thinks it's heading in the right direction. You need to do some work on the trousers though, and add a few crease lines here and there. The holes over the knees don't look very good because they're too straight and rigid. But overall the picture looks fine. Keep drawing ^_^

03-29-2003, 02:50 PM
looking good TK ^^;;

the wind and the movement in her hair is really great as is the expression on her face

crits~ her hips and legs look a bit off, they're facing front on to us whereas the rest of her body is twisted to the side, even if she's twisting her upper body her lower body is a bit too far around. moving the pocket and zips details to the left should help and maybe making the top of her left (our right) leg more rounded as if you could see a bit of her bottom and maybe bring her crotch up a bit higher